Tuesday, April 12, 2016

Earthquake Story

At 8:12 a.m. on Monday morning, an earthquake occurred in the San Francisco Bay area killing two people and injuring six others after a building partially collapsed.

The earthquake that happened that morning was very powerful and destructive, damaging an auto supply shop and causing two people to lose their lives.

"People as far as south Los Angeles and as far as north Redding felt the quake," scientist Penny Gertz stated.

Six people were injured, but only half of them needed medical attention.

"Three of the six people injured were hurt seriously enough to require hospitalization and were transported to Hayward General Hospital," according to public information officer Jennifer Vu. 

Mike Beamer, a resident of the apartments across from the shop, witnessed the destruction of the building.

"I was eating my breakfast when the room started rolling. I dove under the table just as I heard an explosion outside and a chunk of cement flew through my kitchen window. That’s when the screaming started across the street," Beamer recalled.

There were many first responders who came quickly to aid during this devastating event.

"Twenty-one fire personnel, 12 police and five American Red Cross workers responded to the building collapse, with some arriving within four minutes of the quake," Vu said.

This earthquake was massive and very forceful, reaching a high magnitude on the Richter scale.

"The epicenter of the earthquake, which had a magnitude of 6.4 on the Richter scale, was under the Hayward Hills," said Gertz.

 McHenry’s Auto Supply almost collapsed completely, but luckily Hayward firefighters used ropes to stabilize the auto supply shop before is was all destroyed.

"The quake was a strong one," Gertz added.

The families of the victims are being told what happened.

"Names of the dead are being withheld pending notifications of families," Vu notified.

No other serious injuries have been reported in Hayward.


Huntington Story

On Wednesday, 53 year old Janice Jones was accidentally shot in her leg in Barstow, California after her dog knocked her gun off a seat, setting it off.

Officers are considering charging Jones for animal abuse after they found that her dog was malnourished and had cigarette burn on its forehead.

"It could have done with a little less abuse and a few more of those pork chops," animal control officer Janet Ngo said. 

In addition to charges for animal abuse, officers are also considering whether they should charge Jones for the gun accident.

"Jones doesn't have a permit for the gun," California Highway Patrol press liaison, Tammy Rye, stated.

Jones was eating in her motor home when the weapon was discharged, striking her in the leg.

"It could have been worse," Rye said. "The bullet hit two inches from the gas tank."

After the accident, Jones was taken to the hospital and treated.

"Jones was transported to Huntington Beach Hospital via ambulance and later was transported to Irvine Medical Center," Rye confirmed.

Ngo indicated that her office would explore filing animal abuse charges against Jones.


Friday, April 8, 2016

News Values

- Timeliness -

     This article is driven by timeliness because it is about the current race for presidency. Also, because this article was reported on April 6, 2016, which is the date of today.

Headline: "Sanders, Cruz Gain On Front-Runners"

 "MILWAUKEE — Sen. Bernie Sanders showed once again he remains a powerful force in the Democratic presidential race with a decisive win in Wisconsin on Tuesday, setting the stage for a lively political brawl in the coming days, during which he hopes to reshape the race with a defiant surge in New York."

- Proximity -

     This article is driven by proximity because the story is about a homicide that happened near UT. By living in Austin, this story intrigues us because of the closeness that we are to this tragic event.

Headline: "Death on UT campus probed as homicide"

 "University of Texas President Gregory L. Fenves called Tuesday “a tragic day” after campus police found the body of a young woman at Waller Creek. Authorities said they are investigating the death as a homicide."

- Prominence -

     This article is driven by prominence because it tells about one of Donald Trump's campaigns. Trump continues to be a very popular candidate as he runs for president this year.

Headline: "Trump rallies crowd of 15,000 on Long Island"

http://www.usatoday.com/story/news/politics/elections/2016/2016/04/06/trump-rallies-crowd-15000-long-island/82731360/

- Impact -

     This article is driven by impact because it describes how cholesterol-lowering statins can prevent heart attacks and strokes. By reading this, the public can get advice and information on how to better their health.

Headline: "Study: Statins can prevent strokes, heart attacks in low-risk patients"

"CHICAGO — The first major research of its kind shows that cholesterol-lowering statins can prevent heart attacks and strokes in a globally diverse group of older people who don’t have heart disease."

- Conflict -

     This article is driven by conflict because it tells about the problems between the Afghan migrants and the Syrian migrants. They were involved in a six hour brawl after the Afghans threatened the Syrians by beating down their door at a detention camp.

Headline: "Fates Diverging, Afghan and Syrian Migrants Clash in Greece"

http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/09/world/europe/fates-diverging-afghan-and-syrian-migrants-clash-in-greece.html?ref=world&_r=0

- Human Interest -

     This article is driven by human interest because it is about Prince William, and Duchess Kate. Because of their popularity around the world, the public is very interested in their day to day life.

Headline: "Will & Kate set to depart for India, leaving carping critics behind"
http://www.usatoday.com/story/life/people/2016/04/08/prince-william-duchess-kate-india-trip-critics/82481002/

- Novelty -

     This article is driven by novelty because it is about a famous child actor bringing a puppy to the red carpet. Most celebrities don't bring their pets to big events like this, so everyone was surprised and interested.

Headline: "Jacob Tremblay brought a puppy on a red carpet"
http://www.usatoday.com/story/life/entertainthis/2016/04/08/jacob-tremblay-puppy-red-carpet/82788310/

Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Student of the month story

Who - Carolynne Andres
What - She won the student of the month award
When - During the first week of April
Where - At Bowie High School
Why - Because she has great work ethic and friendly qualities
How - By carefully made decision of the staff and the teachers

During the first week of April, Sophomore Carolynne Andres, after a carefully made decision, won the Student of the Month award at Bowie High School.

The student of the month award is a highly respected award that Andres won through her impeccable dedication, amazing work ethic, and friendly qualities.

"I am not sure if I deserve this award, but I am happy and honored to have been chosen to win it," Andres told the interviewer.

This award is symbolized by students who exceed expectations and strive to do the best they can in every single situation.

"Andres always makes good grades and is very engaged and focused in class," 10th grade english teacher Whitney Shumate explained. "She has never failed to turn in all her assignments on time or demonstrate perseverance and hard work."

The principal, staff, and teachers elected Andres to win the Student of the Month award.

"We all feel like Ms. Andres has shown dedication and interest in everything she does and is worthy of this award," principal Stephen Kane said.

Not everyone can win the Student of the Month award, it requires specific personality traits and devotion.

"She spends most of her afternoons studying all the material she learned in class and works for non profit organizations in our community," Andres's mother, Karen Andres, said.

Andres loves being involved in different things at Bowie and keeps herself occupied with after school extracurricular activities.

"I am on the dance team and I also play steal drums for the Bowie band," Andres said.

Even though Andres has a very busy schedule, she manages to still have time for her hobbies.

"Carolynne and I love to walk our dogs and discuss books that we read on the weekends because it is the only time she takes a break from her school work," Andres's friend Bella said.

According to her school, Andres has earned this award, but because of her humble character, she disagrees.

"There is most likely someone who deserved it more than me," Andres responded.

Although Andres works very hard in school and dedicates her time towards helping others, she did not expect to win this very honorable award.

"I was shocked because I feel like I'm not worthy," Andres said.

Being in high school, Andres is looking for ways to help her get a higher education once she graduates.

"This award could help with my transcript for college," Andres responded to a question about her future.

Andres values this award and is now more determined to succeed in her education.

" I have always dreamed of winning this well-respected award and I can't believe that my dream
has become a reality," Andres answers. "I don't know if I will win again, but I will continue to push myself to do better in school."











Nut Graf

Nut Graf:
 
     A nut graf is a paragraph that adds value to a feature story. It is important because it helps the reader and the writer draw conclusions from the events that happened in the story. The slim paragraph is a non opinionated statement and can be directly followed by a quote that proves the statement.
     This paragraph is so vital to the news story because it provides understanding and helps the reader know why the story was written in the first place. By having a direct quote from someone, the reader can make connections to the nut graf written by the author. Overall, including a nut graf into a news story can make the purpose of the story easy to recognize, and show that the author understands the meaning of the story as well.
   

Monday, April 4, 2016

Inverted Pyramid



My First Interview

Interviewer: Isabella Poveda
Interviewee: Carolynne Andres

1. Did winning this award surprise you?

"Yes it did."

2. Why do you think that you won?

"Because of my work ethic and my friendly qualities."

3. How did your peers react to this news?

"They were really happy for me."

4. How did your family react to this news?

"They were also very happy for me."

5. Did your peers treat you differently because you won this award?

"Not really, they were just encouraging."

6. In what ways will winning this award affect you?

"This award could help with my transcript for college."

7. Do you think that you deserve this award?

I am not sure if I deserve this award, but I happy and honored to have been chosen to win it."

8. How are your grades?

"They are pretty good, but not amazing."

9. In what ways did you exceed student expectations?

"I volunteer in my community and I work really hard in school."

10. Do you think that you will be student of the month again?

"I don't know if I will win again, but I will continue to push myself to do better in school."

11. Do you do any extracurricular activities? what are they?

"I dance and play the drums for the band at my school."

12. Did this award make you determined to work harder in school?

"Yes, it did."

13. How would you feel if you hadn't won this award?

"I would have been a little upset but I would have gotten over it quickly."

14. Do your teachers treat you differently or expect more from you because you are student of the month?

"No, they don't."

15. Is your life any different by winning this award?

"My life isn't really different."

16. Did you think that someone else deserved it more than you?

"There is most likely someone who deserved it more than me."

17. How would you feel if you were student of the month again?

"I was shocked because I feel like I'm not worthy."

18. Has your opinion changed about this award since you won it?

"No because I have always dreamed of winning this well-respected  award and I can't believe that my dream has become a reality." 

19. Did you try to win this award?
"No, I did not."

20. How might your life be different if you hadn't won it?

"My life wouldn't have been different at all."